She is heard before seen
Her breathing huh-huh-huh heavy
As if suffocating on the cold air
Yet not actually dying
Puffs of effort-filled mist
Emanating from her open mouth
Her chicken-plucked skin shivering
Despite the winter sun
No sweat to prove
Her dedicated determination

I started writing this poem last week but didn’t get a chance to finish and lost the original “essence’ of what I was going to write. Thank goodness for Merrill’s d’Verse Quadrille #144 prompt – Shiver for getting me back on track! I also have to give props to Björn for his response, “Afterward” and to Kate for her response, “Quiver” to this prompt that set my wheels turning again! Check out “Mr. Linky” for other wonderful shivering submissions! NOTE: I did “cheat” a little with my hyphenated words which I counted as one word to make the 44 word limit. Merrill – will you let that slip buy? I’ll buy you a drink at the d’Verse bar! 😉
So, obviously the “she” in this quadrille is me! This my first Runfession of 2022 but my 17th Runfession blog post since I started doing them in 2019. My last Runfession was actually in January of 2021 – so it has been a year that I’ve been on my running hiatus. Yikes!! Now the huffing and puffing make sense!
You can’t tell from the picture, but it was a pretty cold day when I decided to do a short and quick outdoor interval run. But the sun was out and I had set a goal for myself to restart running/walking/moving of any kind this month.
I have to admit, getting back to running has been hard especially due to my knee injury which hasn’t fully resolved. I’m trying to take it easy and focus on form and (time) endurance rather than speed and mileage. It’s a different way of running, a different idea of myself as a runner but if I want to keep running, this is what I have to do. Slow and steady wins the race, right? Right?…
Also linking to Marcia’s Health Slice, originator of the Runfession.
©️ 2022 iido
“chicken-plucked skin shivering” that’s exactly how I am feeling, Irma! May you keep your resolution, may your running continue. Do take care of that knee though!
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Trying to! Slow and steady will be my mantra! Stay warm, Punam!
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lol thanks for the nod! You look super well … gently does it.
great you’re joining in the run/fun 😉
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Ha! Superbly described…reminds me a touch of ‘The Loneliness of the Long Distance Runner’ just a touch…the hard slog behind the scenes…
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Oh! I will have to look that up! Thank you!
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Yes, it does, Irma! I enjoyed this piece of yours 🙂
❤
David
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I second that! ❤
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Thank you, David!
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Sounds like you got your needed exercises in…
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Yes, I did! 😁
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Wonderful poem Irma.
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Thank you, Sadje! As an aside, I have poems for your prompts that I have to finish! It’s been hard to “stick the landing” this week…
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You’re welcome! That’s great too know Irma. Will be looking forward to reading it.
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Super poem, Irma! My, you are looking good!! 🙂
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Thank you, Chris! It’s the angle! LOL!
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You are much to modest, my dear 🙂
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too (LOL)
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Yeah … way to go Irma, huffing and puffing …great to see on the go again .. there must be something about ‘January’ … I’m on a fitness gig too … (doubled my walking distance)
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That’s awesome, Ivor! How many miles are you doing? Are you still walking to getting your coffee and treats?
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Oh .. I don’t go long way, but I seem to be averaging about 4 to 5 km a day .. which is ok for my old lumpy bones
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Great images of a fantastic winter run
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Thank you!
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I admire runners…you, go, girl! Even with “chicken-plucked skin”, yes 🙂
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Thank you! I was debating on whether to say “plucked chicken skin” instead – lol, as long as you got the image!
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Wonderful quadrille and beautiful, smile-inducing picture! So glad you’re back at it. Me, too. Slow and steady works just fine, and it feels so go to move. And it looks like you don’t even have to run/walk on snow and ice! 🏃🏽♀️😊💕
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Yes! I am all about just moving. Despite the cold weather, we haven’t had much snow – not sure whether to be happy or sad about that!
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Good poem and what determination. Now that we know, we’ll keep you accountable. All the best. xo
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Thank you for the accountability! I know I’ll need it!
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I’m so pleased the prompt helped you finish the poem. I love the image you create with “her chicken-plucked skin shivering,” and yes, hyphenated words are perfectly fine. Usually my quadrilles are full of them. 😏
Good luck with your running. It was very cold today when I went out walking.
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Thanks again for this inspiration!
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You’re very welcome!
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I am still working from home during this pandemic… and that means I run 5K every second morning… cold yes, and sometimes icy,,,
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That’s wonderful, Björn! Be careful on the ice! Do you have those yak-traks for your shoes?
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I have spiked shoes when I run… it works really well
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Glad you got back into running: there’s always euphoria to be found amidst all of that huffing and puffing!
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The poem so happily expresses your resolve! Sun or rain, you’re running away, smiling at the pain 🙂
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