In a cavern
My muse languishes.
Beside her
A broken paddle,
And smashed frame.
Her voice blusters,
A construct of words without meaning
The how of creation
Forgotten in the wake of her shipwreck.
Without poetry,
My muse readies herself
For the long goodnight.

The coolness was a relief from the heat outside. I can’t remember the name now, but I remember the feeling.
A double achievement today – and maybe proof that my muse is alive and well! First, this poem which was inspired by De Jackson’s dVerse Monday Quadrille prompt to write a poem of 44 words incorporating the word “muse.” I have to admit, I had forgotten it was quadrille Monday and had written a lovely yet longer poem which I then had to cut down to 44 words. Hopefully, I chose the right 44 words to keep!
Secondly, I am almost caught up with keeping my streak for Patrick’s Pic and a Word Weekly Challenge! Well, if a streak could zig zag and backtrack and then move forward…what do you say, Patrick? I’ve incorporated #296 – Bluster, #288 – Wakes, #282 – Cavern, #281 – Paddle, #280 – Construct, #279 – Frame, #278 – Creation and #276 – Poetry. As a blogger, consistency is key so I am quite proud of my efforts in keeping this streak going.
The muse may be despairing in this quadrille, however, I have to admit, I am feeling quite the opposite. Maybe it’s because it’s a new year…maybe it’s because I am writing again and reconnecting with all of you and reading all the wonderful bloggers that I have missed in the past few months…maybe it’s because I have also started running again….maybe it’s because all these maybes mean potential and potential is hope…and if ever there was a better muse to muse about, it would be Hope.
©️ 2022 iido
I hope you are able to build a rescue raft out leftover pieces from the ‘The Shipwreck’ …
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What a lovely song and sentiment! You always find the right ones. Yes, I was thinking of adding to the poem to end more hopefully – there are many pieces to pick up if one looks and is willing to do the work.
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We seem to accumulate a myriad of pieces along our journeys Irma …
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Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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The muse is, always alive, it’s just, that sometimes, we, lose sight of, and, lose our access, to them, but, they’re, always, there…
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Yes…we just have to remember that they are always there waiting for us….
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The broken muse in despair is such a superb, strong image, with wonderfully conceived lines echoing around the cave…so original, and powerful, the how of creation…or even howl! Really stunning poetry.
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Thank you, Ain. I like your suggestion of howl instead of how! ❤️
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Such a touching poem Irma
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Irma, for sure your muse is no longer in a cavern!
What vivid imagery! It feels so good to read you again and more frequently. ❤️
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Irma – I’m so glad to know that your muse isn’t actually in this condition right now 😀 – your imagery was so crisp…
Sincerely,
David
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Forward, backwards, upside down, inside out… anyone who can incorporate so many prompt words in a single 44 word poem — that’s really quite a good one — gets kudos from me. The streak is alive! 😉
As it stands, you may have noticed I haven’t posted — or written — this week’s challenge yet. Ooops! By the end of Tuesday, you’ll have another one to catch up on. 🙂
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Writing, running, and hope. Perfect actions to reinforce each other! 💕
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Thank you, Jane! I love your insight here!
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And all you can do is wait for her to remember to come and retrieve you. Well done.
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Thank you! Yes…the wait can be the hardest part…..
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Inspired, indeed! So happy you’re finding breath for your muse.
I absolutely love this:
“Beside her
A broken paddle,
And smashed frame.”
Makes me ponder the things that might remain…what is my tired muse holding in her hand? She feels a little shipwrecked. What’s left to start again? Thank you for this bit of inspiration today.
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Yes, good question…what might remain…
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A muse without words would for sure suffer..
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But hopefully not for long…
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Lovely poem.
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Wow, smashing! You did more than well to catch up. 🙂 Happy running and poeting into 2022!
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hope is indeed a powerful healer, and running is your passion … so glad to see you back on board Irma! Like this one, and caverns … done over a hundred hours underground in much small and prettier ones than this one 🙂
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There is so much beauty right below our feet. Alas, I get a tad claustrophobic so I would not be a good spelunker. Have you posted any pics from your underground adventures?
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never thought to take a camera, not even of the crowd!
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LOL, well, Kate, you know what the “young’uns” say – if there’s no picture, did it actually happen? 😂 😉
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lol not my problem if my dreams are so vivid 🙂
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