I think I’ve caught you
Little boy, aged 2
Hide seek
Like a bird, you flew
Behind that tree – Shhhhhh…
Quick sneak
Pretend “Where are you?
I cannot see through!”
Like that tree, you grew
My mind thinks, “Adieu!”
It’s bleak
When you hid, I knew
How quick the years queue
Don’t peek
Little boy, aged 2
I think I’ve caught you
I am so thrilled that Hélène Vaillant has resumed her “What Do You See?” Photo Prompt Series. The pictures she chooses usually have a whimsical side and this one above is no exception!
This poem responds to D’Verse and Frank Hubeny’s call to try the Lai Nouveau a variation of the Lai. I’ve also incorporated Patrick’s Pic and a Word Challenge #186 – Caught – this prompt could have gone in so many directions but the combination with Hélène’s picture sealed the deal!
This picture brings me back to the innocence of children, especially those kids who have not yet mastered object permanence. Magical thinking is a large part of these toddler years. As a parent, I still employ this type of thinking to try to stop time and prolong these captured moments.
©️ iido 2019
❤ Just… lovely.
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Thank you! A different kind of caught…
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Very nice. A game of hide and seek and growing older.
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Thank you, Frank! Your suggestion to write the first/last two lines was very helpful!
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Lovely poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Manja!
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Ohhh Irma writing a lai has become your second nature…while mine still sit unfinished in my desk…lol..this is lovely..
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Thank you, Mich! I do like the rhythm of this style although I’ve read from other poets doing this challenge and they disagree. Please post yours!! The month isn’t even half over and I’m sure it’s fabulous!
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Ah, such sweetness in this poem, how precious is the time spent with children. They do grow and fly away too quickly. A beautiful composition, Irma.
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Beautifully written Irma. Very touching 💜🌼
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Thank you, Jen! Capturing and holding onto these sweet moments….
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Thanks Irma
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You have captured the innocence so beautifully, Irma. ❤️
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These are the moments in childhood that hold a special place in my heart.
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Yes, they certainly do.
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very sweet use of the prompts, with a cuteness factor 🙂
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Thanks, Kate! I am a sucker for cute!
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me too!
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I actually thought that was one of you babies. This was a cute poem!
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It is – the youngest. Glad you liked it! 💕
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So the other person used your photo? I was confused, lol! I saw it on her post and thought it wasn’t yours. Anyway, cool either way! That is a cute picture.
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Oh gosh! Nope – I’m confused – the picture of the kid behind the tree isn’t my kid! Lol!! I thought you were talking about another picture on another poem. 😅
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Sweet photo and I like how you made a story out of it. I thought the refraining lines were just right. Thanks for joining our dVerse poetry form challenge.
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You are most welcome! I’m really enjoying these challenges!
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