I see your silhouette
Outlined in the stillness of a winter afternoon window
The grey sunlight, a filter of contemplative conversation
The quiet, a prayer shawl wrapped around your broad shoulders
I am drawn to this same space
Of whispered wants and hopeful haunts
I wonder what wish leaves your lips
And almost miss the sigh of your Amen.
Your blacked out form leaves
And I am left listening to the shadow of your footsteps in the hall
Reminding me that in this sacred space
God sees what I cannot.

One of the “perks” of working in a church is that I can pop in whenever the mood hits. Our church is usually kept dark with only the light from the candles and windows illuminating the sacred space. Sometimes, when I go in for a visit, I notice that someone is already there. Most times, I would leave to allow them some privacy. Other times, I stay and share the space with them. This past week, I even saw our new pastor praying in the quiet of our church as I passed through.
Sadje’s What do you see #169 meshed beautifully with this poem. The picture reminded me if the “all-seeing eye” or “eye of providence,” in reference to how God sees all. There are several scripture verses that talk about God seeing in ways that humans cannot (1 Samuel 16:7) and God watching over everyone (Proverbs 15:3, Psalm 33:18, 2 Chronicles 16:9). Inevitably, this also reminds me of the Police song, “Every Breath You Take.”
Whether you believe in God, Allah, YHWH, Buddha, Gaia or whoever you call your higher power, being “seen” (and not in the stalker sense) seems to be an innate need that we all have. Isn’t that why we blog and post and tweet and snap and TikTok? What matters more though – who sees us or what they see?
©️ iido 2023
your poem resonates, we all need to be ‘heard’ to be ‘believed’ 🙂
lol definitely not my motivation Irma … I blog for me and am always pleased if others join in 🙂 It’s more a diary, record of ppl who impress me, trying out new poetry forms, etc … who else deletes more than 3,000 phony followers 🙂 and never dabbled in those other social media forms …
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You’re one of the few then, Kate! Although, I’m of the same mind as you, I have to admit, I do get a thrill which each new “follower.” I am happy when my words resonate with others though and am grateful for comments and dialogue with others.
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the interactions with like-minded ppl is the absolute best part!
I found most ‘followers’ had never commented or interacted in any form and so I felt a need to eliminate them. Never understood what that was all about, do they expect me to follow them? I read those I follow and always read one of their posts if someone makes a comment on mine 🙂
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Yes – quality over quantity!
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any day!
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Beautiful, Irma, and as usual your narrative that follows resonates at least as strongly with me. I Hope you are doing well.
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Thank you, Jane! I’m glad it resonated! I’ve been reading a non-fiction book called “Belonging” and I think that might have also influenced this writing.
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I’ll have to take a look at it. 😊
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A beautiful take Irma. The need to see and be seen resides in us all. Thanks for joining in with this beautiful, reaffirming poem.
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I love how you curated this poem from your encounter in church and the image from the prompt. my favourite line is this – “And I am left listening to the shadow of your footsteps in the hall”
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Hello dear friend! Thank you – I also really like that line! Hope you are having a good start to the new year!
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