Orange fingers reach out trying to warm the cold grey steel. Is it a “come hither welcome” or the desperate grasping of a last chance attempt to prevent slipping into oblivion? Still, the sun’s tendrils hover in that space between, a promise or a reminder of potential. They mimic the train tracks that reflect back this conundrum in a different voice. Tracks can lead away or lead towards depending on the sound of the train.
How can this indecision be solved in the quiet stillness of transition? It doesn’t – instead it needs to be savored like cognac or espresso caressing your tongue, warming your mouth, your throat, your belly. Only then can you appreciate this moment in time.
Sunrise or sunset
Best seen with eyes gently closed,
Heart thrown wide open

For the visually challenged reader, the image shows the sun setting over the horizon, and in the foreground, you can see rail tracks.
I knew I had to write something for Sadje’s What do you see #63 when I saw this picture. It reminded me of living in New York City and riding the subway to and from school. I lived in Brooklyn then, but went to high school in Manhattan. I did school plays and would stay after school for rehearsal then hanging out with friends. I loved watching the sunset. Years later, when I was home from college over the summer, I had a job doing interviews with alumni from my college. We had moved to Long Island by then, and I would wake up early and take the LIRR into the city for meetings. I loved watching the sunrise.
When I first looked at this picture, I thought it was a sunrise and then read the description which said it was sunset. It always amazes how people can look at the same picture and come up with totally different descriptions, explanations, meanings. That’s one of the things I love about picture prompts, and all prompts really: the responses to these prompts are so varied yet each one is beautiful, poetic and true – at least, for the poet and the people who resonate with their words.
I wonder if all people understand this concept or if it is only poets and writers? Photographers and painters (especially the abstract kind) – probably definitely. Sculptors? Architects? I would think so. Engineers and mathematicians – maybe not, since, in their disciplines, there is usually only 1 correct answer. Politicans – I guess it would depend, but currently there is a cohort where I can confidently say, “No, they do not understand or accept this concept”. Extremists who are willing to go to jail or die for their misbegotten ideology – definitely not.
“Art and love are the same thing: It’s the process of seeing yourself in things that are not you.”
― Chuck Klosterman, Killing Yourself to Live: 85% of a True Story
©️ 2020 iido
hello Irma, you spoke so well about something that creative people, poets included have been judged for years. we tend to see and understand things and events in a way different from other people. Where do i stand on this?. i respect the judgment of other people, but what do not understand and will never accept is when their judgement becomes destructive and offensive.
happy new year my dear friend❤❤
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this is so warm and gentle, just like the light effusing the pic!
I feel a stillness in your heart maybe for many things but at least for the 20th!
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Yes! Hoping it all goes well on the 20th….
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doubt it will be smooth but at least they have the troops there!
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I love this poem Irma! There should always be respect for the point of view of everyone. The difference between what each of us see is what makes life interesting. Thanks for joining in
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Your haibun, caressed my soul and warmed my heart. Such a meaningful haiku! Too good, Irma. ❤️
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Beautifully written haibun! The haiku was pitch-perfect.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad it resonated with you.
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You’re welcome
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I tried what you suggested. The experience was truly mesmerizing, as is your poem.
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Thank you so much for yo comment!
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