His presence captures the nuance of a place
The feel of colors on the wall
The look of air captured in stillness
The sounds of triumphant details
The smell of belonging within a vast space
His presents are introspective breaths inhaled
With a click of a camera
And the scratch of a pencil on the back of a ticket or napkin
And exhaled onto a screen where he dares us
To be present in the world

( The image shows an old-fashioned camera resting on a faded map. There are three photos in sepia print next to the camera)
This poem was inspired by Sadje’s What Do you See? Prompt #32 which features a camera on top of a map with photos of the Eiffel Tower in Paris, the Colosseum in Rome and a city street (maybe New York?). Of course, when I saw it, I immediately thought of one of the few photographers I know, Patrick, and his Pic and a Word Weekly Challenge #234 – Presence.
I was actually thinking of titling this poem, “Patrick – A Poem”, but I wasn’t sure if the subject would appreciate that since he seems most comfortable behind the camera than in front. I owe Patrick a great debt of gratitude – he was one of the first, if not, the first blog that I followed and commented on. I was quite surprised that he actually responded to my comment with such warmth and humor. That’s when I realized that WordPress wasn’t just about posting stuff. It really is about building a community through words and pictures.
You can find my first submission for Patrick’s Pic and a Word Challenge # 43 – Lesson – HERE. It took awhile, but I have been fairly consistent with doing this challenge, even though I am a week behind. Patrick’s photos are breathtaking and his words are thought-provoking. In another life where I have more of an artist’s eye, I would have loved to be a world traveling photographer and writer. But for now, I am content seeing the world through Patrick’s Pix to Words.
Β©οΈ 2020 iido
Well done Irma …I’m sure Patrick will be pleased with your creative poem….πππ
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I hope so! It hasn’t seem to have caught his attention yet….
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lovely work Irma, had a peek at Patrick’s pix and words … he sure has talent and he seems the kinda guy who would go with the flow π
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Yes, he is quite mellow, you’d like him, I think…
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I’m sure I would … any friend of your is a friend of mine π
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I think that your poem captured that ability of how a photographer can immortalize a moment. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you, Sadje! I canβt take a good photo but I know a good one when I see it. Looking forward to your next prompt!
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Thanks a lot Irma.
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This is a great tribute to your friend.
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Thank you! He was instrumental in getting me started on WP, besides being a talented writer and photographer.
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A great tribute, a lovely poem. π
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Thanks for the comment and visit!
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You are welcome. π
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good….
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Thank you!
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This poem speaks truly of how a photographer would capture a moment by a single click of the camera..
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Yes, the talented ones (or the lucky ones) can do that so well. A picture is worth a thousand words as the saying goes!
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What a lovely verse, Irma! I am sure he will love it.
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Thanks, Punam! π
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You are so welcome, my dear.
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