A glimmer of God I feel in your touch
As your head turns to the sound of my voice
Your eyes see me as one who knows so much
Aware that I held the power of choice
The transformation came awhile ago
From the seed that was planted deep inside
Yet my mind still accepted these changes slow
Despite my body being modified
And then like a flash in the dark of night
A surprise, this gift you bestowed on me
The honor of knowing love at first sight
Your touch confirmed that I am your mommy
That point of love exponentially grown
I pray to deserve this baby on loan
This sonnet was inspired by Patrick’s Pic and a Word Challenge #225 – Glimmer and Frank at dVerse who requested poems with couplets.
The biggest inspiration though was my friend, Lindsay, who gave birth to a beautiful baby boy this past Wednesday. Amidst the scariness of this pandemic, miracles of life still happen! The above poem isn’t her birth story (Lindsay is a wonderful mom to a 2-year-old already) but maybe it’s yours or someone who you know.
I have to admit, with all the forced togetherness, I have forgotten at times that children will act like children and the mandate – whether from God or Gibran – is to be more like children. So yesterday, we did no school work and played outside, enjoying the sun and observing the flowers that have blissfully blossomed, unaware of the threat of illness or death.
Children are truly a gift – they know what is important in life. It’s none of the things that adults think are important and that is such a wonderful blessing.
(c) 2020 iido
I like the thought at the end of the baby being on loan and giving thanks for the privilege to protect them.
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Thank you, Frank! I do like that idea as well.
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Babies are on loan as you know only too well! And if they live long enough they will move out into the world to have their own life and all this current chaos will be a distant memory!
Enjoy the sun and flowers, they will empower and that boosts our immune system, stay safe Irma ❤
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I am hoping this will be a distant memory with life lessons for my kids. Stay safe, Kate! I feel you have a wonderful mindset for staying healthy and sane during this time.
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it’s a lifestyle I’m most comfortable with Irma but I promise you I wouldn’t like to try it with a kid let alone a bunch … good luck xx
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This is so loving and cute! Also, I like your coffee mug. 🙂
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Thank you! That mug is a good reminder!
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We unlearn the important things as we turn into adults. Children remind us, as you said. Your poem is life-affirming and appreciated as it brings light.
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Thank you, Lisa, for that affirmation! Yes, children have so much wisdom to share if only adults will listen.
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“That point of love exponentially grown
I pray to deserve this baby on loan”
I love this lines Irma. If we think of our babies that way then maybe just maybe parents will be more aware of how they should take care of their little ones. As sad as the current health scare children are also being neglected by even their own parents. I wonder how these adults can even take the idea of simply bringing a child in this world and not at least give them a life they deserve..
Keep safe in there Irma and your little ones too..
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I know – I am so saddened when I read about the increase of child abuse and domestic violence because children are now at home with the abuser. (sigh) I hope you and your family are also staying safe and healthy!
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Stay safe in their Irma….keep healthy and my prayers are with you and your family always
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And mine go out to yours as well….
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I agree that kids know what is important.😊. I love the way your poem ended. Nice job.
Pat
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Thank you so much, Pat! Especially at this time, kids know how to put things in perspective. -Irma
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what a sweet sonnet, timeless in fact, every generation has worried about new borns and you give them a voice, Irma this is your forte, opening the eyes and ears of your readers to the plight of the unnoticed and forgotten. I enjoyed your frolic with the kids and pray you all stay safe and healthy my sweet, sweet friend
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Thank you for your kind words, Gina! Being able to bring to light those forgotten stories is one of my goals as a writer. That is why I love your writings on nostalgic pasts that keep the memory alive. I hope you and yours are also staying safe and healthy. I know you put your health at risk with your work. Praying for protection for you, dear friend! ❤️
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The ties between mother and child are such a wonderful thing… but in the end there will be some separation.
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Quite true – hoping to delay the inevitable but I know that is the way of the life. Hoping you are staying safe and healthy during this time!
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Wonderful. Happy all. I wish it continues.
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What a beautiful sonnet. I couldn’t agree more that babies are gifts on loan. RIght now my heart goes out to all who are pregnant and all with newborns at this challenging time. So scary.
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I so love the thought of kids being on a loan to us. Such a beautiful thought. This time together has strengthened our bond further. Stay safe and healthy, Irma and do give kids occasional breaks from school work. 😊❤️
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