The smell comes first – crisp like biting into fresh lettuce and clean like a new baby. Then a breeze with a “just right” coolness that even Goldilocks would approve of. Next comes small green buds, slowly sprouting from the soil and branches, testing patience and bringing hope.
The scent is different inside where nature has less power. Chemical, metallic, like a fake robot baby or what some earth dweller thinks the sun might smell like. There is no patience only promises of change, the beginnings (but not the endings) of transformations that manifest in mops plunged in buckets of soapy water, clothes sorted into “too big”, “too small” and “just right for now” (again, Goldilocks would be so proud), and the whirring sound of a treadmill going nowhere fast. The buds of transition form, shaking off the covered winter self to sprout the wings of the self that could be considered “the cat’s meow”.
Transformations start
The promise and hope of spring
Even cats can change
This haibun was written for Frank Tassone’s Monday Haibun prompt at DVerse to write about spring. The picture is courtesy of Sadje’s “What do you see?” Prompt #15.
This has been a bit of a busy week but only because I’ve been trying to get miles for the Taji100. That means that the time I would usually spend at night writing, I’ve been walking on the treadmill. I’ve logged 35 miles out of 100 so far!
It has been unseasonably warm this winter and we’ve also been inundated with a lot of rain. Spring seems to be already here in terms of the weather. But my body is still in hibernation mode. I don’t yet feel the need to do any big cleaning or to get out and about. I’m still holding on to my sweaters and fuzzy socks.
I’m not ready to transform into my “spring self” – the one that is ready to take on the world. Nope – my “hold on to the hygge self” is still going strong and honestly, I don’t mind the winter induced resting period. Making time to recharge and slow down is important and something that a lot of people overlook.
Cats know the value of inactivity. They may not literally transform into “catterflies” but cat owners can argue how cats can be transformative to their owners. Here’s to transformations – whether they can be seen or not!
©️ 2020 iido
Lovely spring haibun. It has the aromas and crispness of new beginnings. Your haiku is the most exquisite, don’t think I have ever read a cat one ever, it’s adorable. And wow to those runs you are getting in. Go girl!
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Thanks Gina! It was fun incorporating Sadje’s picture prompt into this piece.
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a very evocative photo!
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Spring, and renewal that it brings makes us realize how we appreciate the change it brings to our lives as well.
A lovely poem. Thanks for joining in the prompt.
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I think I enjoy your explanations of your thoughts behind your poems even more than your poems! Keep them coming, and bravo re your running.
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Thank you, Jane! I’m glad you like the explanations – a bit of online diary for me. As for the running, it feels crazy but I have impressed myself with the mileage!
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I loved the similes and the haiku is wow! Go girl go…I do vicarious running through you, Irma! ❤️
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I carry your poems in my head when I run, like the topics you pick and the cleverness in your lines. Running is great for thinking about poetry!
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Irma, you brought tears of happiness to my eyes! I am so blessed to have connected with such beautiful people here. ❤️
Now I know how you write such heartfelt verses…it is all because of your running! 😄
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As am I! ❤️❤️
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so eloquently expressed … you are right, we all need down time! Time out and love that sorting of the clothes says so much … keep running, better you than me 🙂
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As soon as I am done with these 100 miles I might just stop! 😂 defiantly would need downtime then!
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yes it’s a huge pressure … maybe a balance would help?
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Maybe…although I feel my life is more a pendulum thank a scale…
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true, all parents would agree with that 🙂
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My cat certainly knows about downtime. Pity it rarely coincides with mine 😉
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Isn’t that the way! My cat was the same – I think it was purposeful! 😀🤔
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Lovely spring haibun.
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Wow…those runs Irma….just wow…
Your haiku is beautiful and i was smiling about the cat’s transformation….you really have a way of making me smile.😊😊😊
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Thank you, Mich! I’m glad to brighten your day!
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