Her hooves pawed at the frozen ground.
Her coat matted a sticky mud brown.
The haflinger snorted, nostrils flared
Tossing her mane without a care
Or so it seemed, this lonely horse
Left in the cold without recourse
She was too old, her back too swayed
A life giving rides to any who paid
But now, no longer able to work
No more carrot treats as a perk
Standing in the mirror, she nuzzled her reflection
The mirror an impractical gift of appreciation
Her breath fogged the silvery surface
As the moon emerged and shone on her face
A tingling started and then a pain
Then something blossomed in her brain
A horn of gold twisted from her forelock
Her coat showed no more signs of muck
Her body grew with muscles strong
Her mane and tail got Fabio long
She turned to the mirror and let out a neigh
She won’t become glue to her owner’s dismay
No more prancing for the pleasure of others
A unicorn surely should not be smothered
She nudged her stall door then galloped out of the barn
Without a look back, she didn’t give a darn
As a unicorn, she didn’t need to linger
But if only she had a middle finger
I had fun writing this poem for Sadje’s picture prompt What do you see? Challenge #12 although the inspiration was actually a sad event.
My daughters take horse back riding lessons. There is a halflinger named Sarge who has been at this barn for a long time and is usually the first horse that new students ride due to his gentle nature. He is getting old and has been having some physical issues. His owner mentioned selling him when he can no longer give riding lessons. I asked the owner if she would sell him despite making her a lot of money giving riding lessons. She said despite Sarge being a good horse, that he still needed to earn his keep and that she would have no use for him if he is no longer able to work.
I didn’t grow up on a farm so it is difficult for me to wrap my head around the idea of animals that aren’t pets, that they are there to serve their purpose for humans – whether pulling wagons, laying eggs, giving milk or being our food. I know I participate in this exploitation and I joke about it (if cows didn’t taste so good…) however this reality really saddened me. After years of work, this horse would just be tossed away as if he didn’t matter.
The Go Dog Go Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt to use the phrase “standing in the mirror, she…” helped me turn this sad scenario into a happy ending. Sometimes we need to take a good look in the mirror to see our self-worth and to leave situations or people who don’t honor our worth. We might not sprout a golden horn, but our confidence and self esteem would shine through.
©️ 2020 iido
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A glorious fantasy story, wondrous narrated Irma, you’ve made my day, and going to kick open my door door and go for a prance around…… and here’s a song……
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Ivor!! Loved that video! Horses are so majestically beautiful! Thank you for sharing it with me. You’ve made MY day! 🐺🦄
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Your appreciative reply, brings an added smile to my sunny day xx
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I love the poem, and your explanation of motivation even more so. ❤️
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Thank you, Jane! I am glad it resonated with you. Hope you are doing well!
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so very well written, combining the two prompts and then your own thoughts bringing this to a more meaningful end.
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Thank you, Gina! Putting down this lovely horse would be meaningless, senseless. I’m glad that my words can honor this lovely creature.
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Lovely poem! I loved how you’ve turned a sad event into a joyful and positive story.
Thanks for being a part of the challenge.
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Thank you, Sadje! I always try to find the positive in situations. Your picture prompts have been inspiring!
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Thanks a lot for joining in.
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You are most welcome!
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Fantastic, Irma! Love what you did here! ❤️
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Thank you, Punam! Trying to channel your rhyming mastery!
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Aww! You are too kind. You are welcome. ❤️
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I am very impressed with your frame of thought in composing this piece. And this piece is very life-inspiring too. Well done!
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Thank you, Papa!! That means a lot coming from you! ❤️❤️
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Thank you for the reblog, Sadje! 🌻
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yes a wondrous transformation … do wish that all unwanted animals and human beans had the ability to transform in this way! You honoured the reliable horse 🙂
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Yes, there are so many out there who need and deserve to be loved and wanted. Sarge was the first horse my girls road. If money wasn’t an issue, he would already be ours.
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money and the right facilities for their good life 🙂
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Realizing, that she only, needs, to live, for her self, and nobody else…
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Yes! We all have to practice that self-care. Unfortunately, animals are often at the mercy of their owners. Thank you for this insight!
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A dream for Sarge maybe? I hope he finds someone who will care for him in his old age…
I loved your poem too!
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Thank you, Anita! I hope Sarge has a happy ending. Having a horse is very expensive (otherwise I would have already bought him) so I am hoping someone will give him a good home in his old age.
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I enjoyed your post very much. And who is to say that isn’t what happens once the horse crosses over the rainbow bridge. I feel bad there is no loyalty in return for a gentle creature that has served them so well. Humans are an arrogant species that nothing seems to be able to set limits on.
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I agree – it seems for a lot of humans, loyalty means nothing while profit means everything. I do hope animals have their own version of heaven – they are so deserving in so many ways.
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A charming poem for a sad story. I love the way you have given the dear old horse a happy ending 🙂
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Thank you, Chris! I do think everyone should have a happy ending 💐
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Absolutely 🙂
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