I wander down a dark hall
Peeking in this room
Throwing wide the doors in another
This door is locked
That door I quickly shut
One door leads me down a corridor/path that takes me a few hours to get through and back to where I was before
Now, I have to walk quickly
The light from my phone
Illuminating the way
I find a door and pull it
But it’s stuck
I jiggle it
I lean into it
I hip check it
I take a running start and slam into it
I slide down and sit
My back against it
It opens
And there sits my muse
She says, “Hello…Poet.”
I originally wrote this poem for Jamie Dedes’ Wednesday Writing Prompt to “write about our own creative process”. You can read other responses to this prompt here.
I also incorporated Christine’s Brave and Reckless October Monster She Wrote challenge #9, Down a Dark Hall into this poem. That title pulled the poem together for me as my writing process is necessarily compartmentalized otherwise, I wouldn’t be able to complete my other obligations during the day.
I had several different endings to this poem – the version I posted for Jamie as well as a few others, but after reading the synopsis for the book, Down a Dark Hall, I felt I needed to change the ending to make it somewhat more ominous (even though my writing process is anything but ominous…despite doing most of my writing in the middle of night in a darkened house where I’m the only one awake and the wind is howling outside and the tree branches scratch scratch scratch the window pane…).
So I changed the punctuation! Oh the power of a three tiny dots! Scary, isn’t it?
©️ iido 2019
The creative process can ominous, dark and arduous or fun, enriching as well as breezy! You have captured the darkness well.
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love it, I thought it was a dream but your creative process fits perfectly … you will always find the right door even if it takes effort to open it 🙂
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I understand this one perfectly
My doors, open and shut, as needs be
Light enters on a my white pony……. oh, sorry Ivor’s dreaming again…..
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Love it, especially the ending! It IS ominous.
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Thank you! That line from the muse replays in my head in the voice of Seinfeld as he is greeting Newman. 😁
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Had met my muse again..and now i am back…lol..
Very beautiful Irma..i thought at first it was a nightmare but i was wrong…and i smiled reading the ending..
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I’m glad it made you smile! That elusive muse! Mine has been buried under numerous obligations lately…
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I really dig this manifestation of your writing process. I think the choice of line breaks adds to the suspense as well. I can relate to your labyrinth of creativity.
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Thank you for noticing that detail! Writing has always lead me to many surprising paths!
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