The setting sun filters
Through your leaves
Highlighting the new
Yellows and oranges and reds
I see you
When I return home
After I’ve gone
Through the motions
That life is ok
Even when it’s not
You filter the beauty
Back in my life
Joining in the fun this week with this 44 word poem for Merril at dVerse, Quadrille #89 – Are You Set. It was also inspired by Jamie Dedes’ wonderful Wednesday Writing Prompt to “moments and places where we enjoy the beauty and peace of nature and a deeply sensed connection with the source of our being”. You can read other responses to this prompt here. (Note: The poem above is an revised version from my original submission to The Poet by Day.)
I love sunset more than sunrise. Maybe it’s because I am inherently a night owl. It just seems so peaceful! I especially like seeing sunsets while I’m driving the car, with my kids quiet in the back – usually after a long afternoon of after school activities. My 6 year old son usually says, “Mom, look at the sunset! Take a picture! It’s so pretty!” I usually respond, “I can’t, I’m driving. Take a picture with your mind.”
©️ iido 2019
Sunsets are beautiful for me too, as I am too bleary-eyed and busy in the mornings! You have captured the beauty filtering through the tree wonderfully.
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Thank you, Punam! Trees are so calming and beautiful, especially at sunset although I was not able to capture such an image on my camera.
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Your words captured it perfectly! You are so welcome, Irma.
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Nice lines: “That life is ok
Even when it’s not”
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Thank you, Frank! It’s the optimist in me. 😁
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a beautiful poem with a great ending
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!
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what a cute kiddo to say that 🙂 Love your quadrille, very restful 🙂
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Thank you, Kate! That’s exactly how that tree makes me feel! 🌳
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what a blessing to have it nearby 🙂
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I’m a morning person, but I love sunsets, too. 🙂 Thank you for your take on the quadrille. I’m sorry it took me so long to get to it.
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No worries, Merril! The busy season is upon us all!
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