I knew you were going to be the best father for my children. Fate – or maybe my subconscious heart – told me the first time we met. We were seated at the diner after a college party and you were telling me about your dad. We were smoking because you could still do that back then.
As you exhaled and smoke embraced your face, time seemed to slow and as the smoke cleared, I stopped hearing your voice and instead heard another saying, “I can see this man being next to me as I’m giving birth.” An odd thing to have come into my head since I was 21 and no way near wanting to have a baby.
Still, that thought stayed with me. And now, six children later (though only four are here with us), I can say that I was right.
Rooted love withstands
So entwined limbs can bear fruit
Life perennial
This haibun is for Patrick’s Pic and a Word Challenge #197 – Fathers. I’ve chosen to tell the true story of the first time I met my husband. It was the first thought that popped into my head for this prompt.
©️ iido 2019
Your beautiful Haibun bought a tear or two, to my eye……..((Hugs))
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Thank you, Ivor! I know YOU know what True Love is…❤️❤️
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your reflections gave me a sense of peace and safety, knowing your family has a strong leader and protector. your love and admiration of this man is felt in every word. the haiku is excellent Irma. you connected family and nature so precisely.
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You’ve discovered the two qualities I most admire about my husband. I’m glad that came through! Family, like nature, need water, sunlight and strong roots to make it grow.
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I am glad…smiles my friend, you are blessed.
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Such a beautiful haiku about how true love feels and is symbolic of the nature around us.
To feel that connect in an instant is magical and may that magic never fade, Irma. God bless!
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Thank you, Punam! I never believed in love at first sight until I met my husband. 22 years and still going strong…
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And may you go strength to strength!💞
My pleasure!
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what an especially loving tribute to the man in your life … how amazing that you knew so quickly! Glad you are the happy parents of four … sorry for the two you lost
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Thank you so much, Kate. He was definitely the right one to have by my side especially when our two little ones died.
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if you survive that you can survive anything 🙂
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True!
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Ahhh, how lovely! 🙂 I love it when we know such things. Carry on!
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Thank you! We are still going strong 22 years later….
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That is so sweet! I kept mine at arms length for awhile. I was scorned before I met him and was starting to lose all faith in men. Luckily it didn’t take him too long to win me over.
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I hear that! I had sworn off all men when I met my hubby. Maybe that the trick to finding the right one? 😉
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❤️❤️❤️
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