When Lola* arrives, it’s hard to deny there’s magic
The children happily sigh, “She’s magic!”
My tween can whisper secrets in her ear
Lola – my spy who can pry – hush magic!
My sweet girl’s dollies all need a cuddle
Lola’s arms wide like the sky – hug magic
Train engineer boy with curious spark
Lola answers all the why’s – smart magic
The toddler is whining, “No” is his word
Lola sweet talks – he complies – bribe magic!
Then quiet, they gather around her chair
Lola gives sweets on the sly – bad magic!
Homemade dinner, there’s so much to clean up
Lola’s sink is spotless, dry – clean magic
I’m exhausted, drained, this job is so hard
Lola’s shoulder, allows me to cry – mom magic
My first attempt at the ghazal poetry form was inspired by Jamie’s Wednesday Writing Prompt to write about someone I admire. According to Gay Reiser Cannon at d’Verse, who introduced the components of the ghazal for their challenge, the ghazal’s narrator “is always a hero longing for the unattainable”. I hope my longing for the unattainable “motherhood” is evident here. Please feel free to comment on this form/content, etc. – all feedback is welcome!
* Lola is Filipino/Tagalog for Grandmother. This poem is dedicated to my mom, my children’s Lola. She really has the magic touch with my kids (along with my dad). They simply adore her! In fact, my youngest has declared Lola his best friend. This makes my heart so happy!
I know I can never reach the level of sacrifice that my mom has, but I can try to be the best mom to my kids as I can be. In the meantime, my mom has already surpassed motherhood goals and is approaching the pinnacle of grandmother-hood!
©️ iido 2019
Absolutely delightful, and yes to all of that.
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Thank you, Paul! I think this form has been the hardest for me from dVerse’s challenges.
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Yes, not easy at all. Has drawn us out a bit.
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Yes – isn’t that part of the what poetry is supposed to do though? 😉
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Yes, sure is 🙂
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I can totally relate to the “lola magic” …
And how it transforms a child….and my oh my sometimes they can be so nosy too.
Lol
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Lol – yes, nosy and still “(s)mothering” – but their love for their grandkids is so pure. I never doubt it although at times have doubted it for myself.
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Love my grandkids to the moon
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Yes and they love you back! ❤️
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lol a great tribute to your mother’s magic, love this form.
It’s great you have such an inspiring example but grandparents get all the fun jobs while Mum’s have to deal with the daily grind and discipline 🙂
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Very true! I read once that a mother’s reward comes when she becomes a grandmother – all the fun and none of the hard stuff. I don’t know if I can wait that long sometimes!
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lol you will,, nature offers no shortcuts on this one … my Dad said that if he knew being a grandfather was so good he would have missed the first part ❤
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😂😂
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I think this makes both a modern ghazal on a timeless theme of the love of mothers, not often in the male centric world of traditional ghazals. I love that Lola means Grandmother and it is a common name in Spain too but there abuela is grandma. I delight now in telling my granddaughter I am her mummy’s mummy. Forget the chaotic houses and the cleaning and spend the time enjoying and creating loving moments.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! ¡Abuelas son muy importante! And I agree – time is better spent creating memories together than cleaning.
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I like the way you have used this form. Grandmothers are so special and this is a lovely tribute. ❤️
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Yes – grandmothers are VIPs!
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Oh, they so are! ❤️
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She sounds like the quintessential, perfect grandmother! And with her for a mother, I don’t se how you could fail to be a wonderful Mum.
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Thank you so much for your generous compliment! I try not to fail as a mom but to at least be “good enough”. 😁
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