The last precious one
My final task done
Red rose
Above pollution
Away from poison
It grows
It’s a red beacon
In this world, barren
Sorrows
My steps are heavy
There’s pain in my knee
But still
I climb this aerie
To set my mind free
Fulfill
A promise, a plea
Keep on – hopefully
Until…
No one comes after
It’s such a bother
To care
There is no anger
It’s just whatever
I dare
Say that forever
Gone this red flower
No spare
Another Lai Poem — are you guys tired of this form? Not yet for me! The rhythm and rhymes challenge and intrigue me – it’s like a haiku but “extra” (at least in my humble opinion).
This Lai Poem incorporates Patrick’s Pic and a Word Challenge #187- Red and serendipitously, Hélène’s What do you see? photo prompt picturing a red flower (I’m calling it a rose) atop a high tower.. This image of an older woman precarious climbing this enormous tower reminded me of the Herculean task (or is it Sisyphean?) of climate change activists today and even for people like me (and hopefully you!) trying to do our part to protect our earth.
©️ iido 2019
Excellent my eco-warrior! May your tribe increase! Can never get tired of the lai form. You use it beautifully. ❤️
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Thank you! I must done my recyclable armor and spread the word….
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So you must! You are welcome, dear.
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Magnificent poem, you excel in this form, Irma. I love the sentiments flowing through your words.
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Thank you so much for your praise, Hélène! You continue your generosity despite your full plate. Please know you are very much appreciated! ❤️❤️
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❤️🙏🙏
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i really love how you created this one, the third line of each stanza is like a poem on its own when out together, the Lai is one of my favourite forms too, you do splendidly!
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Thank you so much, dear Gina!! Another commonality between us! I have fallen in love with the Lai form. 😍
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Neither the form nor the topic are in any way tiring, nor your treatment of either here. ❤
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Thank you for that validation, Patrick! ❤️
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You are most deservedly welcome, Irma! =)
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powerful message in a beautiful form, really do love your poems Irma … you have talent!
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Thanks for the compliment! There are so many talented poets on WP (you included!) – I’m always learning.
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ha I’ve only just started learning the various forms, I have tended to write free form
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I’m just learning the forms as well…now I can’t seem to write anything but poetry in forms…
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lol I still switch back to my own free form quickly …
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