A sign of caring
Our palm sweat sharing
Not just the space
But the challenges we face
As people with varying melanin
Who offer all that we have within
We seek fairness and balance
To even the score without askance
Who smile with delight at another’s gain
And delicately hold them when they’re in pain
Who will defend with a voice so clear
And sit quietly with an open ear
Who sees with hearts and not just eyes
Who knows the child as being most wise
Our hands clasped, approved by Mother
Who sees how much we love one another.
This Sei Shonagon style of List Poem was introduced to me by Punam at Paeansunpluggedblog with her fabulous poem, “People who get me hot under the collar” . The beautiful picture is from Hélène’s “What do you see?” Picture prompt.
The picture reminded of my recent trip to Santa Fe, NM – something about the vast open spaces and the flat topped mesas, the roads that seem to go on forever, the friendliness of the people – it all reminded me of how much goodness there is in the world. This poem reflects that – at least what I see as the goodness in people whose hands I want to hold.
©️ iido 2019
This is so, so beautiful, heartwarming and resonates so deeply. Marvellous job, Irma. I am humbled to be mentioned in context of this lovely embodiment of human spirit. Thank you so much. 🤗❤️❤️
So apt for Hélène’s prompt!
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Beautifully written Irma, your words are like a prayer, praising the good of all that there is. Something we all need to see and acknowledge that there is good in the world.
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Absolutely! Your prompt reminded me of that. Thank you for always seeing the good in my poems. 💐
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You are a precious writer Irma, you always put your whole self into your poems which makes them come alive and so real.
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Oh Helene! Your words are now tucked away in my heart. ❤
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In my heart too, your writing is always special to me. Have a nice weekend, Irma.
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Yes!
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I think my comment is wallowing in your spam folder.😉 Never mind!! This is so beautiful that I would love to comment again. 😊
First of all thank you for mentioning my poem. I am truly honoured. This is such an affirmative, positive and beautiful poem which embodies the true human spirit. Love this, Irma. ❤️
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Thank you! Although I was surprised how writing a list poem required a lot of thought. I will have to try to style again. Thank you for introducing it!
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I have realised seemingly easy forms require a lot of thought. I too will try it some time again.
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holding hands is even more personal than kissing don’t you think? i love how you assembled the words here Irma. blending sensitivity and humanity, I would want to hold your hand and the hand of those you want to be in this circle of love. Punam is a very inspiring writer, her words always evoke positive vibes.
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Yes, you and Punam and do many other writers here are the hands I would hold as well! Hands can be so intimate – I have always been fascinated by them and find myself watching people’s hands when they talk. We need a circle of love in the world right now!
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oh we so do, so much hate and unkindness, if we could only reach out with more tolerance
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Yes – it makes my heart sick hearing the news nowadays….if only tolerance was an injection we can give to everyone, like a vaccine against hatred…
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i would be in line to help develop that my beautiful friend
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I’d also like to hold hands with you … this is so sweet and profound, this is how we should all be with each other, well written 🙂
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Thank you Kate! You’re on my hand holding list as well!
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yea now I will sleep peacefully tonight Irma 🙂
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❤️❤️❤️
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It would be such a privilege and an honour to hold your hands dear Irma, Gina and Kate. I am humbled by your words of praise and blessed to call you my friends. ❤️
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Yay! We can start the circle! You are all true inspirations!!
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