If ever there was a reason to run
Just pick one, or more, that gets you to start
Run from the weather – snow, rain or the sun
Run from the pain of a broken up heart
Take one step, then two, and three leads to four
Fast steps or slow steps, or even combine
Just moving forward can settle the score
The gift of running can lead you to shine
Not just with sweat but with thoughts that bring peace
The clarity comes with each passing mile
Arms pumping like flying that brings release
When you’re done hyperventilating – smile
Running from means you’re also running to
Does the Why matter? Just Run. Run for you.
This sonnet was my attempt to join in the fun with Björn at dVerse. I am a tad late with this entry and Mr Linky is closed but if you happen upon this post, and have some thoughts, I would love the feedback! I always feel like my sonnets are too “campy, nursery rhyme-ish”. Maybe it’s the meter or the rhyme, but I feel like I can’t write a grown up sonnet. I bet Shakespeare never felt that way…
Usually sonnets are written about love so this one is about something that I love – running. As with any love story, the longer the relationship, the more ebb and flow in feelings, but for the most part, running has remained a constant in my life where the highs outweigh the lows.
Today, February 1, 2019 starts the Taji100 challenge where I will attempt to run/walk/crawl 100 miles in 28 days. Doing that math, that means about 25 miles a week or about 3.6 miles a day. Being that today brought snow and icy conditions that prevented me from running (and alas, no treadmill at home), I am already behind. I have plans tomorrow to make up some miles though!
I think that is one of the greatest gifts of running – perseverance. Another mile, another two minutes, another 10 steps, run until the next light post. Little victories, little defeats, but in the end…that sense of accomplishment…smile….
I enjoyed it. You have the meter and rhymes down. It is fun lovinf but for me it is great.
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Thank you so much, Jordy! So glad you enjoyed this one!
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I’ve been stopped , my walking program has been curtailed mid-step, hopefully I can begin
soon………………..
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You will, Ivor!! I know you’re getting stronger every day!
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I loved this poem, it captured exactly how I feel (felt) about running – such freedom, such reward, such clear headedness. Sadly, I cannot run anymore, but this poem made me feel a bit like I was able to revisit the feelings that I had when I did. So, thank you!! So well written too. Good luck for your challenge, what an amazing goal!
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Thank you so much for this comment! It went straight to my heart. Have you been able to find a running alternative?
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I get my exercise endorphins at the gym on a stationary bike, and my sense of achievement/satisfaction, elsewhere…. writing being one of those things!
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Oh yes! So glad you have find other alternatives and worthwhile activities.
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Shakespeare would surely be glad ro read your sonnet..knowing that there is more to sonnet.than broken hearts…lol..
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Lol! Thank you! I hope Shakespeare would approve!
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a sonnet about something you love and i agree it is something to love and be proud of, not your conventional sonnet but one that is pulsing with life, modern sonnets can be like this, a new wave. i think it will encourage others to start running too. all the best for reaching your goal! i will start again in March after the Lunar New Year.
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Thank you for this comment. I do like the mix of classic forms and modern topics. Happy new year as well! Nothing like a new year to start training…
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Beautifully written. I love the perfect flow of a true verse. It’s like being hypnotized when your writing. A rare and wonderful experience.
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Jen! Thank you so much for your words! They are now tucked away in my heart. ❤️
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OMG I forgot you were doing the Taji100!! How bad of a friend am I? Let me know when you want to run. I’ll put in some miles with you!
Can’t give any pointers on witting English was not my strong point in high school. But I do like reading your poems. Even if they are campy and nursery rhymey.
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Haha!! Maybe I’ve read one too many Mother Goose rhymes…I’ll definitely take you up on those runs though!
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well done!
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Thank you so much! 💕
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pleasure
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Really enjoyed this one! Could totally relate as a fellow runner poet! Thanks for sharing. My poem today is about kayaking in case you have time to read?
I am also on Instagram #coachingcreatively in case you use this medium, we could follow eachother? Sam 🙂
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Thank you! So glad it resonated with you! I’ll stop by and check yours out.
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Thank you!
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