The steep facade never phased
Your brave eyes, upward, gazed
Climbing with such sure feet
Never thinking what if, defeat
Yet steeped in my fantasy
My baby is all that I see
Letting go hurts my heart
For I know, this is just the start
Mish at dVerse provided the prompt “steep” for Monday Quadrille #72. I didn’t realize how versatile this word can be! I am not such a fan of steep heights but my daughter (and her friends) are. Ah, youth! Or as a mom, I say, “wah, youth!” 😩😭😭.
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Well written and what a nice thing to do together, making nice memories 🙂
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I like this. It is so true we start to see them moving into the world with less need for us, and we wonder how they will handle those steep climbs!
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Oh yes! On the one had being proud of how they are confident to venture out – on the other hand, the sadness that they are venturing out without you. The conundrum of motherhood!
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It is definitely a conundrum.
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Nice line showing different focus: “My baby is all that I see”
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Parents and kids often see the same thing in a different way. Thank you for visiting and commenting, Frank! I value your feedback.
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I can feel how proud you are of your daughter venturing out on her own; while at the same time you are kinda worried that she no longer needs you to venture out ( am i making sense Irma?)..
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Totally!! That is the seesaw in my mother’s heart….
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let them soar! you have equipped them well!
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I hope so! And they know I am here if they fall…
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that is all they need to know
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Every time I look at my son I often think how big he is gotten and how much he doesn’t need me as much as he needed me before. Then there are times I think he needs my help and then he reminds me he doesn’t. The bittersweetness of childhood.
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So true! Motherhood is so full of these moments…
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Wah, indeed! You have expressed so beautifully what motherhood is all about. As a mom, your heart speaks the language of my heart. ❤️
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❤️ The hearts of mothers share the same language. My heart is sending yours hugs today! ❤️
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I don’t know if it ever really gets easier. My 32 yr. old is exploring Southeast Asia by himself, with a backpack. I like the way you’ve captured your daughter’s bravery and zest for life along with the natural instinct we have as parents….to worry. Luckily most of what we worry about never ever happens. 🙂
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Oh my! The other side of the world! I hope he is enjoying himself. And you’re right, most of our worries are unfounded. Thanks so much for your comment!
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Beautifully and rhythmically pitch perfect, the two perspectives, the joy of letting go and the heart hanging on. We may learn if never quite feel the trust of the future.
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Yes – so much truth in your last line….❤️
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