Bach’s Prelude in C Major is a well-known piano piece that is about two minutes long. Close your eyes while you listen to it and imagine a stream gently flowing over rocks as it meanders through green forest. Now imagine 130,000 barrels of oil being dumped in that stream. What will happen to the forest and the critters living there?
Now picture the wind whispering over a meadow blanketed with flowers still bright with color despite the new moon. And now a bulldozer comes to move 5000 tons of garbage onto the meadow including plastic that will take a millennia to decompose. How do the colors and aroma of landfill compete with that of wildflowers?
Or listen to the music and let your mind wander over the ocean, the warm sun highlighting the majesty of humpback whales breaching the surface. Now heat trapped by greenhouses causes 600,000 tons of ice to melt in Antarctica raising temperatures that could kill 400 plant and animal species in a year. Would seeing the dead carcasses of whales and other see creatures be as majestic?
Two minutes, the length of a prelude whose repetitious melody can remind us of the repeated wastefulness and mindless consumption we daily engage in that will lead to the destruction of this planet we call home.
Two minutes to kill
The only world that we know
Time to change the song
This (very loosely defined) Haibun was written for Jamie’s first Wednesday Writing Prompt of 2019 focused on the theme of the environment. I also included the last Tuesday Writing Prompt from Devereaux and Beth Amanda at the Go Dog Go Cafe. Their request was to include the words new moon, minutes and prelude in a poem. It definitely took me more than 10-15 minutes to write this Haibun!
The facts embedded in this poem come from this article about things that happen around the world in a minute. I doubled the numbers to match the two minutes of the prelude (I hope I did the math correct!). Conservation and protection of our environment is a cause my family and I are passionate about. We recycle and are trying to compost. We limit our plastic use – the kids have even given up straws! Just two minutes of a small change to your daily habits can make a difference! You can save the world with reusable bags as your cape!
©️ iido 2019
Great post. A very powerful message.
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Thank you! I wasn’t sure about the length on the prose part…I feel like I can go on and on about conservation and protection of our environment. I appreciate your comment.
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I’m not expert on Haibun, but the length of the prose felt right to me. It was my pleasure.
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Thanks for the validation!
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This is a wonderful piece!
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Thank you so much! 💐
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powerful post and wondrous meditative approach to visualising the mass destruction!
I live off grid so this is also my passion 🙂
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I would love to live if the grid! We’re trying to be as mindful of our consumption and waste as we possibly can but living where we are makes it difficult. We all still need to do our part though, no matter how small.
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absolutely Irma, we can only do the best we can with our current circumstances …
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Your passion shines through these words and makes a strong appeal. Love the haiku.
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Thank you! I do love haiku!
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My pleasure Irma and you do the haiku very well. ❤️
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It’s hard to count the ways in which I love this. It will remain with me for much more than 2 minutes, and it’s a message important for forever.
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Thank you so much for visiting! I am glad my work has made an impact. 💐
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This is a beautiful Haibun Irma
And i would like to applaud you and your family for doing and taking part in preserving mother nature…and i am also thrilled to know that, that is your advocacy…we too have the same advocacy..my daughter bought metal straws instead of using plastic straws..we also segregate wastea disposals and recycle…and it may seem small act but if we all do just a that small act together then maybe just maybe we can create a bigger and greater impact ..
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Yes, couldn’t agree more!
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Excellent work. The prose was very powerful and the poem at the end summed it up in a nutshell. Definitely got me thinking!
Bernie
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Thank you so much, Bernie! If it made you think, then it was a successful write! 💐
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yes i am passionate about this cause too and do whatever i can – very good post!
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Thank you dear friend! We only get one planet, right…
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FYI: Irma, there’s a call for submissions to a Chicken Soup for the Soul anthology on running. Sounds like your bailiwick. Scrool to “Runing for Good – and Walking Too!” https://www.chickensoup.com/story-submissions/possible-book-topics
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Thank you so much for letting me know! I will check it out. Also glad you are out of the hospital. Sending healing vibes your way! 💐💐
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poetry, beautiful framing device. This is so important – thank you for using your voice to speak about the environment. If people refuse to use their heads and listen to science, then our only hope is that they use their hearts and listen to poets.
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Yes, your last line here is so important and so gorgeously said. Thank you!
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