(For your ears: Moonlight Sonata by Beethoven)
Sitting at the instrument
Of lament and longing
Listening to the moonlight
Touch my eyelids
Willing for this to be fantasy
For you to hear the harmony
Of safety and love
Bookmarking this time and place
So our stardust can, one night, embrace again
This poem is a companion to the Quadrille written for Hélène Vaillant’s and Jamie Dedes’ prompts for this past week. It’s a beautiful gift when inspiration strikes twice.
This secondary title of this poem, Quasi Una Fantasia, means “almost a fantasy” and comes from this essay on Beethoven’s famous Moonlight Sonata. I do not listen to a lot of classical music, however this piece I am familiar with since I shed many tears listening to the First Movement after my twins died. That phrase, “almost a fantasy” describes the surreal feelings and thoughts I experienced after I got home from the hospital without my babies in my arms. It also describes the “what if’s”, “if only’s”, and “I should have’s” of the grief experience, as well as the hope that eventually leads to healing.
©️ iido 2018
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Irma, i can’t image what you have gone through. It certainly was most painful. I do know you are a strong spirit, willing to go the distance in your healing grief process. Thank you for sharing what is in your heart. ♥️🙏
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Thank you for sharing this Irma..it is beautiful….(not even enough to describe it.)…i know your little angels are smiling right now.
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Thank you! I hope they are! ❤️
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Beautiful! I love the last line, “Bookmarking this time and place So our stardust can, one night, embrace again”
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Thank you! I love that line as well!!
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yes another powerful poignant piece …. what a lovely thought that they are always together and hopefully one day your stardust can embrace 🙂
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Yes, it is a belief that I hold close to my mother’s heart. ❤️
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the strain of guilt will never be totally rid from our hearts and minds, it keeps me awake at night and forgiving ourselves is the hardest to do. One day you will embrace their stardust again, it will be a joyful reunion! i am crying as I read oyur words, it moves my heart so much
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Your empathy touches heart. ❤️ I know you understand that middle of the night guilt and the self talk of forgiveness in the moonlight. Healing is such a long journey sometimes.
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yes it is. I lost the one child in infancy and then another at age 20, being happy seems so ridiculous sometimes. but we have to go on, heal and help others heal. That is why our writing means so much to me, no bitterness just a celebration of their beautiful lives.
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Yes – a celebration is a better of remembering!
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This is so wistful and poignant. Thank you so much for sharing these two verse Irma. ❤️
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❤️
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so soft and so beautiful.
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Thank you! These is a softness here, like what the moss might feel like against your cheek.
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yes i agree!
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May you continue to find healing in the expression of the gratefulness of your shared memories.
(((((hugs)))))
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Thank you so much for your kind words. ❤️
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