He said, “Wicked!”
“Chill,” she said
“It’s a slow burn. Wait for the flames to gather.”
It was a Radical Idea at the time
“Face to face?”
He said, “Wicked!”
They tried it, taking turns
Taking breaths when it got too hard
“Chill,” she said
Yet their fervor created a spark
Embers spread via mouth to mouth with tea times and tupperware
“It’s a slow burn. Wait for the flames to gather.”
This post is a “two-fer”! At the Go Dog Go Cafe, their Tuesday Writing Prompt, Devereaux and Beth Amanda requested: Use the words “wicked chill” in any form of poetry or prose. While Victoria over at dVerse Poetics, thoughtful of the catastrophic wildfires in California, asked us to “think about…the many other possibilities that apply to fire, and bring us the results of your burning creativity“.
Despite the seemingly conflicting mandates, my little poem seeks to illustrates how one spark – an idea, a change in behavior or outlook – can create a fire, a fervor for that change. There are many things I would like to change right now. My flame may flickering , but it will not go out!
It’s been so long since I wrote a cascade poem. You make me want to revisit it. So glad you shared.
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Thank you! I do like this form a lot! Please share if you write one!
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This is absolutely beautiful…the way you have melded two different prompts. And your flame will never go out.
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I hope not!! You keep stoking the fire! ❤️
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I sure will! 💕
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Love the thought of ideas cascading down… like tributaries filling waterfalls.
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Yes! That image is what makes this one of my favorite forms.
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Well crafted and such a pleasure to read Irma… 🙂
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Thank you so much, Rob!
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Nice line: “Yet their fervor created a spark”
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Thank you – Happy that kind resonated with you. I like it too!
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oh you used wicked chill so cleverly! sparks fly from your words. so true that we need to let that fire kindle slowly to be of any use.
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Yes, and true deep communication and relationship is one of those that can’t be rushed….
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or taken for granted -agreed!
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This sparked the thought…patience is a virtue.😉 Beautifully we!😊
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Yes, patience and determination can get you far! I think they are calling that “grit” nowadays…
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Yes, I haven’t read that book but I listened to the author on one of the podcasts I listen to.😊
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I don’t know if its just me but i thought it started out as a fun poem but the last two lines gave me a sensual vibe..(???!!!!)
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Yes, the poem is intentionally “suggestive”! 😉 another play on the fire…
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