I continue to feel brave today and have decided to post a haiku for Brian’s nature themed Comment-a-Haiku Poetry Competition at Vita Brevis. I’ve actually been feverishly writing haikus all weekend, looking at old nature photos I’ve taken, and staring intently out the window looking for inspiration.
It was difficult to pick one that I thought would be a worthy competitor – there is a plethora of talent and beautiful imagery in the comments section of the post. I picked the one that called to my sense of “nature haiku poetry”.
Below is my submission for the Vita Brevis nature themed haiku challenge. If you continue to scroll down, you’ll be able to read some of my other nature themed haiku musings. Thank you so much for this opportunity, Brian! Drum roll, please….
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“Nature: A Mother’s Love”
We reap your colors
And still, you send us rainbows
Your tears mixed with oil
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(My runner ups)
“Morning on the First Day of Camping”
Cool fingers massage
My city shoulders relax
Green giants heal me
“Sacrifice”
I heard you drowned in
Plastic bags and straws so, I
Trade coffee for water
“Not happily every after”
Can’t think of beauty
Without beastly pollution
Nature has no prince
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Did I make the right decision? What’s your favorite?
©️ iido 2018
great poems
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Thank you! Sometimes you just get into a groove and all these words pour out. I’m glad you liked them!
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Congratulations!
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Thank you! Did you have a favorite?
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